First off, for those of you wondering how Luka is coming along, here’s an updated picture. The front side is just about done, now it’s on to the back. Not perfect, but not too shabby for a first sculpt.
This story was an absolute bear for me to trim down to 100 words. I almost left it longer, but wouldn’t have been able to live with myself. I could have gotten a much, much, much longer story from this prompt, but I forced myself to limit it to the 100 words. I didn’t want to cut any of it, but some tough decisions had to be made in the name of my OCD like compulsion for exactly 100 words.
As always, thanks to Rochelle for hosting and the lot of you hooligans for reading.
I’m going to add a page that compiles all of the previous Winger posts into one space after I post this one. That way I don’t have to keep linking back to them. You can catch up there if you need to, just click the “Winger Drabbles” link at the top.
Comments, criticism, and half drunken rants are encouraged, as per usual.
Always Be Prepared (The Winger Chronicles: Part 7)
The glowing stream had long since disappeared into the bowels of the earth. Their only source of light became a flashlight he kept in his pack.
Liv’s fingers wrapped around the knob of the door embedded in the back wall of the cavern.
Winger pulled his gun from the holster on his hip and leveled it above the light. “Ready.”
She yanked open the door.
He watched the narrow beam of light. By the time he saw the bladed pendulum coming his way, reaction time was nil.
It ripped into his left bicep.
The flashlight tumbled.
The cave went dark.
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September 25th, 2013 at 8:56 PM
Now I’m thinking about a Gunslinger named Roland. Do you know him?
As always, well done.
September 25th, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Roland is one of my favorite characters of all time. Definitely a big inspiration behind Winger. The drawing of the three was my first thought when I originally saw the image of the three doors.
September 25th, 2013 at 10:25 PM
Thanks on the Luka update. He’s come along pretty well.
Oooh – I like how you took the door theme & put one into the story within the dark cavern. Creative!
September 27th, 2013 at 7:03 AM
He is coming along well. There are areas that could use some work, but I just don’t have the experience yet to really get exactly what I want. I’ll get there in time though.
A door in a cave is highly unusual, but it’s not the first time I’ve used it in a story. Not sure why it keeps reappearing in my work.
September 26th, 2013 at 2:42 AM
Nice story. Equally nice sculpture. I’m impressed with your talents.
September 27th, 2013 at 7:04 AM
Thank you kindly, Sandra.
September 26th, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Dear Mr. Ickes,
Mr. Poe would be pleased.
Aloha,
Doug
September 27th, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Poe is a has been. In the sense that he has been, but is no more. I do enjoy his work though.
September 26th, 2013 at 4:53 AM
Dear Adam,
Nice sculpture. Bummer of a day for Winger. Guess that’s what he gets for being on the cutting edge.
Shalom,
Rochelle
September 27th, 2013 at 7:11 AM
I have a feeling a gash in his arm isn’t going to hinder him too greatly. Might cause some problems down the road, but for now it’ll be bandage it and move on.
September 26th, 2013 at 10:54 AM
…And, I can smell trouble setting in. This is action packed and lovely!
September 27th, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Glad you liked it Charles
September 26th, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Great action sequence here, Adam. I suggest you omit “from his hip” and give yourself three more words.
September 27th, 2013 at 7:14 AM
I thought about that when I was editing, but I just couldn’t make myself do it. It seemed too important for some reason though I’m not sure why.
September 26th, 2013 at 7:59 PM
The sculpture looks really good. and interesting tale here. Wonder what happens next
September 27th, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Thanks. I wonder what happens next as well. That’s the hard part about doing these based on photo prompts. I could have an idea of where I want to go next week, but if it doesn’t fit with the prompt I have to come up with something that goes in a completely different direction.
September 27th, 2013 at 3:21 AM
At least it was only his arm. Gripping stuff.
September 27th, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Indeed. It could have been much worse for him.
September 27th, 2013 at 8:54 AM
gripping. and woah, Luka looks great
September 30th, 2013 at 7:13 AM
Thanks.
September 28th, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Cool sculpture! And cool story, too — an injury for Winger, but you mentioned in the comments, it could’ve been much worse. Another challenge for the guy, one in a cavern that looks to be full of challenges.
September 30th, 2013 at 7:15 AM
The good news is he’ll likely be out of the cave. The bad news is it likely won’t be asy to get out with one messed up arm.
September 29th, 2013 at 9:19 AM
Oh I’m always careful with those balded pendulums … so now he has to managed one-handed… (in the dark)
September 30th, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Sounds like a good time, right?
September 29th, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Oooh, now I’m wanting to know what happens next… the sci-fi route is so outside my comfort zone, writing wise. But, I’ve really enjoyed reading the various entries. This one is very good, Adam. I think mine is predictable.
The sculpture is fantastic!!
September 30th, 2013 at 7:41 AM
I’d like to know what happens next also. I have an idea but that could completely change based on the next prompt.
September 30th, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Which makes what you do so much more interesting… really fun, Adam.
October 1st, 2013 at 11:38 PM
I would say that’s a great job for a first sculpture. Nice tie-in using the prompt with your story.